Strolling along the beach at midnight,
Lost in the solitude with melting sands,
Looking out towards an azure horizon
– still invisible.
.
Hands reaching around to clasp
The tremors of the wind; now inciting
To embrace the warmth of another’s arms
– still invisible.
.
Breathing in the sorcery of the night,
Heart beats to the pulse of a shy moon
Humming the silent songs for a beloved
– still invisible.
.
Eyes shine at the fireworks of the stars,
Igniting the rich plumage of a buoyant sky
Bridal shower awaiting the paramour
– still invisible.
.
Salt-kissed wisps of thoughts scintillating,
Stealing a wish from the floating lanterns.
Come whisk me beyond the galaxies you,
– still invisible!
A girl dreams. A woman hopes. For that love to sweep her off the feet into a spiral of ecstasy and euphoria.
Nights like these link up very well with Open Link Night at dVerse 🙂
Magical scenes .Regards.
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Thank you Jalal!
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you welcome.
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Sometimes, it is good to be invisible. Your words evoke the many times I have wished for invisibility or at least, to be alone or alone with that certain person.
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Thanks a lot for dropping by 🙂
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I think you are very visible with your way with words, your hopes, your dreams. Beautiful poem, Prajakta.
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That was a lovely comment Mark 🙂 Thank you!
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It was a moving poem, Prajakta. Keep up your beautiful writing. 🙂
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So beautiful!
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Thank you Tonya 🙂
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This poem is so dreamy, so beautiful, Prajakta!
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Thank you Christy ❤
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It was so sweet and beautiful. A state of mind so deeply described, I didn’t notice when I got this long smile. Shining eyes looking at the firework of the stars – it was like a beautiful dream, more than just visible 🙂
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Oh thank you Prateek 🙂 That was a beautiful comment! It indeed felt like a dream…
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The beautiful poetry deserved much more, but my vocabulary is limited 😀
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gr 8 idea !!
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Loved your imagery – sensual and beautiful
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Thank you 🙂
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This really is a romnantic dreamy gathering of quatrains, gentle & whimsical. We get so used to hard-edged poetics, it is lovely to chance upon something lighter & lyrical. I like the line /breathing in the sorcery of the night/.
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Oh thank you Glenn! Some nights here just call out for such feelings 🙂
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Ah.. the dream of the life in invisible
dreams to share the dream of Love
with another LIFE.. and then when
years pass.. even with ‘perfect’ LOVE
one can find out THAT INVISIBLE LOVE
IS always real inside and never dies..:)
So MY hope for you for NOW..
is THAT INVISIBLE
IS REAL.. AS
truly IT
can be
TRUTH..:)
IN LIGHT OF heArt
and soul expressed
as SPIRiT
JUST LIKE
you
do
HERE..:)
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🙂 🙂 The invisible is getting real. Every second!
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I think being invisible is far from what you are. So hard though when there’s that special one you wish to be visible for. Love the images you paint here 😉
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Thanks a lot Bjorn 🙂 There is light here now!
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This is beautiful. I feel the yearning in this poem…..and the repetition of ‘still invisible’ really enhances that feeling!
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Oh thank you so much Mary 🙂
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yep – the moon is shy by nature… so well captured.. beautiful atmosphere in this… and i so long to walk the beach at midnite…sigh
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I hope you get to go soon Claudia 🙂
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the incredible imagery is far from invisible! Great write
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Thanks Anthony for such a lovely comment!
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Beautiful poem !
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Thank you Ayala 🙂
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Beautiful images of a dream yet to unfold ~ Thanks for sharing this ~
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Hope it starts unfolding soon 🙂 Thanks for commenting Grace!
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Great imagery as well as the eerie atmosphere of your poem, Prajakta. I like how the repetition of ‘still invisible’ provides rhythm to your words in a very effective manner.
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Thanks a lot Gabriella for your comments.. Appreciate them.
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looking for that someone who really sees you…. finding them is always worth it.
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Always. Feeling luck about it 🙂
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So much is visible in your poem…but the focus…love…is, indeed, invisible.
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Waiting for it to come to light Bryan 🙂
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Stunning phrases….”breathing in the sorcery of the night” …and….”stealing a wish from the floating lanterns”. Love can be delicate and dreamy and you’ve captured that feeling in this poem. 🙂
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Thank you for your lovely comment 🙂
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Your beauty will be noticed soon by the one who is worthy. Great poem!
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Thank you for your kind words 🙂
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You’re quite welcome!
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Very nice!! lovely blog 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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