With the first notes of the sultry music,
She devoured the sparkling wine.
The clock struck the hour of midnight,
Ringing in her moments to shine.
.
Mysterious starlight twinkling in her eyes
Paired the alluring sway of her silken hips,
No glimmer of hope remained for him,
Captivated in the curl of her ruby lips.
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The tapered arch of her back beckoned
A subtle invitation in the candlelight,
Her hair flowing like a stormy waterfall,
She lost herself into the explosive night.
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His hands spanned her curving waist
Locking themselves into a fiery embrace,
Eyes and heartbeats glazed impassioned,
They whirled towards a timeless space.
When some nights are hazy yet clear 🙂 Open Link Night at dVerse is great to reminisce about this night! 🙂
Apt title:). Beautiful:)
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Thanks 🙂
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beautifully penned!
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Thanks a lot 🙂
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Lovely writing and alluring 🙂
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Thank you Darshith!
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Wow! That was one helluva tango 😀
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Glad you enjoyed 🙂
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Lovelyyyyy and captivating 💖💖💖
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Thank you Himali 🙂
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You write too beautifully, leaving me in awe ❤
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Great piece☺
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Thanks Rich!
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Loved it. Amazing!
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Thank you 🙂
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Prajakata!! I just swayed with it…
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Ah! Thank you!
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So very subtle yet sensual!
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Thanks Rob 🙂
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You’re welcome! Plus, this does qualify as your first tidbit post. 😀
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Wonderful writing, Prajakta. Very spicy! 😉
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Ha ha 🙂 I tried Tonya!
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You succeeded…..beautifully! 🙂
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I had shivers running down me as if i was part of the situation…great work!
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Thanks Alok 🙂 Hope the shivers were good!
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Whew! That is one morning wake up piece of poetry. And a painting that could send me into a daydreaming spin for many blissful minutes.
Lovely work.
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Thank you 🙂 Hope you had a great day!
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Beautiful! You painted a picture 🙂
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Thanks Tejas!
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Excellent wordings Praj. Great.
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Thank you Daddy! 😛
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A timeless space? Oh, I want to go there!
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Your backyard has scope there 🙂
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Hah. True enough!
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At least for me there is no higher experience than connecting dance.. Particularly hands off spiraling dance.. So yeah this is my kinda song.. In poetry and dance..:)
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Thanks 🙂 Glad you enjoyed the song and dance!
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Sensuous pleasure at its best.
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Thank you Shailaja!
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Wonderful to be able to get so much out of a dance.. this is the best way ever to connect…
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One of the best indeed, Bjorn! Thanks for commenting 🙂
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Try to get this published, Prajakta. A commendable attempt !
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Wow! Thanks a lot Susie… 🙂
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Ah love this ! Such a smooth enjoyable read 🙂
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Thank you Zee 🙂
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Most welcome ❤
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Beautiful! and captivating poem. Love it!
What inspired you to write this poem?
P.S Sorry I have not been posting any new poems.
I’m no longer posting poems Tuesdays or Thursdays.
I am now posting Mondays, Wednesdays, & Fridays.
So, keep an eye out for later on today.
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Thanks a lot! One Saturday night led to this… I will be dropping in soon 🙂
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Such a sexy dance and you described it so well… I’ve nominated you for the following award: https://amommasview.wordpress.com/2015/07/08/the-loyalty-of-a-dragon/
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Thank you so much! For appreciating and the nomination. I have gone awards-free now… Much thanks again! 🙂 A dragon sounds cool!
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😘
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Blissful……. such an ocular poem 🙂
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Thank you so much Saaransh 🙂
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tango is such a passionate and sensual dance… i wouldn’t even need wine with my tango you know… smiles
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Nice energy in this, as it is with the dance – and there is def an intimacy to it that is intoxicating
and will send you off to distant places. Ha.
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Thank you 🙂
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So beautifully romantic!
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Thank you Mary 🙂
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I love tango too and although, ostensibly the man leads, he really has no chance here, does he?
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Not one bit! 😀 Thanks Marina.
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no dancer here, but you make me wish I were…
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Even I wish I was… 🙂
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Beautiful. You’ve captured the dance of love perfectly. Great word choices. My favorite line is “There was no glimmer of hope for him.” It seems the same might be said for her by the end. Peace, Linda
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Thank you for such a great response, Linda! 🙂
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Wow what a sensual piece!! Beautifully penned 😀
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Thanks a lot Sanaa 😀
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I was as little confused by “no glimmer of hope” for him–was she going to refuse him her favors after the sensuality of the dance? Terrific sensuality, movement, & energy, regardless.
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I am not sure what would have followed next, Glenn. Thanks a lot for your comment.
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I love the imagery in this: “Her hair flowing like a stormy waterfall”
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Thanks a lot 😀
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Wonderful writing 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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I admire the dance & coincidentally also wrote (in draft though) about the tango dance ~ Very alluring to read ~
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I look forward to read your dance, Grace. Thanks a lot!
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Very lovely visual treat Prajakta.
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Thanks Abhra!
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To experience ALL of
the dance of
life is to LIVE..:)
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Fantastic words! 🙂 Thanks
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Sizzling hot tango 🙂
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thanks!
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Sensual and captivating. My husband and I do ballroom dancing and love the Argentinian Tango, different from a standard ballroom tango. But this was a lovely reminder of that complex dance.
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Thanks 🙂 Glad I could take you back there!
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wow – two for Tango – no words – compliments of your words. Enjoy my clip for Tango:)
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I saw this now and absolutely loved it ! 🙂 Perfection
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