Oh Goa, you beauty!
You are not a city,
You are not just a state,
You are a state of Mind!
How you welcomed us with your lush greens,
And cascades of cleansing showers.
You embraced us in your glorious beauty,
And made us a home miles away from home.
You entranced with your secret delights!
The night flea markets,
The dinghy all-night food stalls,
The soft white melting sands,
The intimate backwaters,
The rolling mountain passes,
The magical hidden lakes,
The amber mines and ebony caves,
The milky froth of waterfalls,
The never-dying lamp,
The haunted dead-ends,
The concealed passages of forts,
The lazy floating islands,
The simplicity of your people.
You taught me the true spirit of Chrismas,
Of the worth of giving, sharing and cherishing,
Of the joysof caroling and crib hunting,
Of gobbling X’mas lunches at old wine farms,
Of dancing in the streets during the carnival days…
There is so much more than meets the eyes,
So much beyond the rave parties and beaches,
A feeling of pity comes for those drunk tourists,
Who love you only for the easy booty and alcohol.
You have been a second mother,
Blessed and nurtured within me a new life,
Impatient now you are to hold me again,
I won’t keep you waiting.
I am coming.
Goa is the tourist state of India where I also spent two years doing my Masters. This is an expression of the love and belonging I feel with her. It is a coincidence that Gabriella at dVerse should ask us to write poems on our beloved city when just the other day I wrote this post, expressing my confusion of where do I finally belong. So this was kind of perfect! 🙂
Nice, I enjoyed reading this and now wish to see Goa some day. A pity, true, for those who visit and don’t appreciate her.
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Thanks a lot Kathy! Do come…
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I really can feel the strong love and appreciation you have for Goa. Enjoyed the details you shared in the third stanza….which really gave us a wonderful picture. But, alas, you also showed the reader that the city has its underside..as all cities do…with the drunk tourists, etc. Strong ending –second mother – nice!
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I love this place and I am so glad you enjoyed it 🙂 thanks a a
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I once had a colleague whose mother was from Goa and who had lived there. She only had fond memories too. Thank you for sharing its beauties with us, Prajakta! I like how you ended your poem.
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Thanks for the lovely prompt that gave me the opportunity. Try to make a visit
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Often the tourist spots have another beauty that’s never seen under the influence of alcoholic stupor.. I have always wanted to go behind and see the beauty of real life.. Goa sounds wonderful.
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Goa is wonderful and then some 🙂 every place has secrets that you need to seduce out of it.
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What a wonderful travelogue this prompt has stimulated; lovely poem, & imaginative take on the dVerse challenge. Too often we only drop into a place, city or provence or state or country, & we never strive to visit the places beyond the facade of the tourist mecca; prefer not to see the squalor, poverty, or crime so rampant outside the compounds.
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Thanks a lot Glenn for such a great feedback. The one way to visit any place is close the travel guy and open up with the locals.
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a state of mind and a second mother…love the energy in this…the passion you have comes through in the excitement of your words…..
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Thank you Brian!
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This was like a hymn to Goa. Beautiful!
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Thank you!
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that sounds like a good place to be… the night flee markets… the beautiful landscape…the kiss of the sea… nice… a state of mind… i like
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It is pure magic … I hope you pay a visit soon, Claudia.
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Your love and affection for Goa comes through so strongly praj. Excellent poem.
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Thank you Michael!
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I especially love “you are a state of mind”……I love your mention of return in the closing lines.
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Thanks a lot… it is simply not just a place.
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very nice, poetic list of what your city is like.
popsicle on a stick
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Thank you!
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goa is a beautiful place to be..your love for the place shines in this poem…very nice Prajaktha
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Thank you!
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I had heard of Goa, a Portuguese settlement if I remember correctly, but never knew she was so beautiful. We are lucky to love places so blessed with nature’s grace.
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It was a Portuguese colony till 1961. But the cultural influence is still very heavy especially in the interiors. All a part of it’s unique beauty.
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The rich diversity of images you’ve painted makes Goa real for me. We all have flaws and beauty.
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Thanks a lot JoAnne! Do try to visit India and Goa.
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Aww! you are one lucky girl to have done your masters there. I wish I had a chance like that. The fenny, the beaches, the beautiful place. I love Goa. It’s definitely one of the best places in India to be.
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Probably the best two years of my life, and fenny/beaches had nothing to do with 😀 Visit the off-beat places there when you go…
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True. I have been to some but a lot left. Wish I had a job there.
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I revisited Goa through your poem. Reminded of beaches, coconut trees, Goan fish curry, Fenny, cashew nuts, Goan songs & lust greenery.
You are a true Ambassador of Goa.
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Thank you so much! Such a response is surely motivating to write more.
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This is beautiful. This is one way to write a travelogue! 🙂
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Thank you 🙂 best two years of my life!
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Yea, I can feel it 🙂 And I am sure it is one of the best ways to experience Goa 🙂
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you made me travel the whole of Goa again! people do have typical mentality that people go to goa for parties/drinks…but goa is a lot more! beautifully written!…. comments from a Goan lover coz i visit the heaven every year since 2008 🙂
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Goa indeed is a such a lovely place and your words and the flow simply manifests it’s beauty and bounty of joy and fun of Goa…you are not a state but a state of mind, is a wonderful use of words and I loved it.
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Thank you Nihar… Goa is a part of my system now!
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u couldn’t have expressed it better! Being a goan, I can feel the emotion coming out of you from every line 🙂 Prajakta, you’ve made every goan proud…reading this 🙂
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Thank you so much Savio 🙂 Two years in Goa was a lifetime of joy! Happy it could connect with you so well.
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I too am a loyal fan of Goa and am thrilled to read your tributes in praise of beautiful Goa. I always wonder why Goa is so special and do believe it could has a laid back feel, its music, its dance and of course the fun loving people of Goa.
Thanks aplenty for the lovely poem.
Regards
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it certainly needs a re-blog 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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Reblogged this on theextraaamile and commented:
In the words of Prajakta herself… “Goa isn’t just a state”… but “A state of mind”. Very beautifully written 🙂
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Goa is something else…
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Nice poem
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