A volley of words,
A spur of grimaces,
A wisecrack or two,
A stream of unshed tears.
They were her reluctant weapons,
Inclined to pierce them both.
Every other day and every other night.
No bloodshed. No mortal wounds.
Yet her life drained out.
Nursing a self-inflicted bruise,
She tried to hold on…
But he kept slipping away
Like grains of golden sand.
Like leaves in autumn winds.
It was time
To battle for trust,
To fight and not let go,
To place her faith back in him,
To put a stopper to misunderstandings,
To believe in his love than her nightmares.
No more looking back.
No more burned bridges.
No more drudging up the past.
Only to lose herself in his nook
For a glimmer of hope.
For a chance of future.
For a dream of home.
Looking back and bringing up the past often blinds the way to the future. I have no idea how this poem happened when I saw the prompt “back”! First and possibly last poem Stream of Consciousness style.
Written for this week’s Stream of Consciousness Saturday prompt – “back”. Come and join the fun 🙂
Stream of Consciousness writing has powerful surprises sometimes.
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I keep discovering!
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Funny what happens when you step aside and let the Id-Writer take the wheel. Very cool way to run with the prompt!
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Thanks a lot Pav! It was a cool prompt 🙂
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This was very well penned praj, I did like how you structured it even if it was a soc effort. I like that sense of determination that comes through.
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Thanks Michael for your kind comments! I was surprised myself when I ended up with a poem.
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This poem is beautiful. I really felt connected to the emotions, well written indeed!
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Thank you! I am glad it resonated with you.
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It has the natural beautiful flow. Feeling inspired!
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Thank you Neeraj! It came in that one moment of clarity 🙂
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The poem is lovely, and I like your comment about how looking back at the past can get in the way of the future.
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Thank you so much!
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To believe in his love than her nightmares…………….hmm…I can so relate*
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Thank you. I am glad you could
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