Ever felt so stifled by a life jacket?
That the one thing keeping you afloat,
is also the hand choking you.
It compresses your lungs, on and on,
until you cannot scream or draw in a breath.
Your hands itch to scratch and tear free
the suffocating grasp of the jacket.
You are ready to chance drowning
just to take one fervent gulp of pure air.
Darkness and silence of the void beckons more
than the ringing of your conscience,
than the shine of the blinding sun,
than the last fire of burning lungs.
Amazing ✨
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Wow! The unwanted that comes along the want. This was too good. Loved the metaphor! 🙂
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Thanks a lot, Prakash 🙂
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Funny how there are at least two ways of looking at things. 🙂 Nicely expressed!
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Thank you 🙂
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I feel the strength of the yearning. I hope there’s a way to be free without drowning or burning. A sequel, maybe?
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I am sure there is another way – at times, we are too blinded 🙂 Perhaps, I will find the light in its sequel!
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Sometimes, things do happen in this way; the things that’s our lifeline makes us suffer the most….
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Hopefully, we will come out of those situations soon.
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thing**
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Hello.. Prajakta.. “LIfe Jacket”..
alMost like a metaphor
for Golden
Handcuffs
of the
Government
Employee chained
to the same routine
of predictable subsistence
until the Golden Pot of the Rainbow
comes in at the end of mundane..
predictable insanity..
as it were
for me
for sure
as same
in Einstein ways
of Insanity then away
from jail now as Life Jacket sAMe..
The irony is as sOUr as iT is DelicIOUs
my friENd for what almost killed me
evenTuaLLy set me Free.. and
yes.. the same can happen
with whatever significant
otHeRs are in the
vicinity
of
Freedom
of the heARt..
the SpiRit and
the SoUL in ultiMate
Expressions as aRt of LIFE Free..
no problems tHeir as the only rule
in my household is free for all..
in terms of harm no otHeRs..
aLL
Golden
Rule my
friend
A Life Jacket
unwrapped and
LiVinG StiLL.. FReED as ARt..
heHe.. LiterAlly alMost as such
as my first two naMes are
Frederick Arthur..
kiNda like Fred in
FRiEnD..
No
liFe JackETs
mY friEnd.. nOne..aLLFReEDnow..;)
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Freedom shouldn’t be so hard 🙂 I am glad you have found your freedom!
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True.. thanks
My friEnd..:)
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Omg do I know this feeling
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Hi there,
I am just speechless.
I just loved it 🙂 Thanks for the share.
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Oh wow, I felt pulled into the imagery of this poem from the first line!
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Thank you Christy!
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“Just to take one fervent gulp of pure air.”
Great line!
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Thank you 🙂
P.S. Why have you disabled comments on your blog??
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Hi.
They are actually up & running now.
Thank you so much for stopping by.
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Seems like metaphor for life. And the basic law of nature…every action has a reaction.
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“a”
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In many ways, yes!
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